Saksham Thakur

Children Stories Tragedy Fantasy

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Saksham Thakur

Children Stories Tragedy Fantasy

Nephertites The Indellect

Nephertites The Indellect

23 mins
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INDEX


(i)   Main characters, events and places

(ii)   Introduction

(iii)   Storyline

(iv)   From trade to territory 

(v)   The emergence of Kalmov

(vi)   The mystery of Alpha behind the Brutal Door

(vii)   Bing: The Regmark Door

(viii)   Rim of the Trex

(ix)   The War of Lingden

(x)   The Treaty of Zailles


MAIN CHARACTERS, EVENTS AND PLACES

(i)   Indane        –        India 

(ii)   Leapad       –        Time period of the seventeenth to the twentieth century

 (iii)   Crumes       –        The British 

(iv)  Carls         –        The French

 (v)   Zens          –        The Portuguese

  (vi)   Zeron Dic     –        Lord Dalhousie 

(vii)   Acme Redeem  –        The Doctrine of Lapse

(viii)   Pon         –        Pound

(ix)   Trex          –        A Big Robot

(x)   Kainams       –        Ant like Creatures

(xi)   Rooz         –           The Muslims

(xii)   Coder         –        The Congress


INTRODUCTION

The story begins with a disturbing short time ago, in the late seventeenth century where the country of Indane witnessed a sudden change in the lifestyle of people which were brought to this place by the aliens which destroyed all the peace in Indane and made it a leer land in which people fight among themselves and hate each other and see everyone with an eye of hatred. The hatred has fully taken the place of generosity in the hearts of innocent people and the one who this was no other than the Crumes who came from alien land and therefore are called aliens and made this country hell from heaven. 

 

There are many ways to begin this story but I will begin this with the emergence of the Crumes who came from far away alien land into the country of Indane in the late seventeenth century and how they went from trade to territory and later led to the independence of Indane. 


STORYLINE

CHAPTER I

FROM TRADE TO TERRITORY

 During the Leapad, in the dawn a ship could be seen coming from far away. It was looking like that it was coming towards the port by cutting the sea and the sky. The Sun God were also coming towards the port with it. When the ship reached the port, everyone welcomed the people of the ship but who knew that one day they would become a cause for the destruction in Indane. 

 

NOTE: The people in the ship were none other than the Crumes. 

 

The Crumes said to the people of Indane, “We have come here from far away and want shelter in this unknown island for few days” to which the Indanes replied, “Hum aapka swagat karte hain” (we welcome you). To the surprise of Indanes the Crumes could understand their language and this became a major weapon for the Crumes to destroy Indane”.

Many people were wanting to take the Crumes to their home but the Crumes stayed in a residential palace. One day, when the Crumes were talking among themselves, a slave came inside and said, “some burglars are coming towards us.” After hearing this a dazzling smile broke out on the faces of Crumes as they saw it as a chance to show the Indians their power and show their power to them and without wasting a second, they took their guns and rushed out to fight with the burglars. In the battle that followed all the burglars were killed by them. 

This was the key event that changed the temper of the Crumes from trade to territory. Many Indanes saw Crumes as a developer of their nation and thought that they would bring modernisation in their country but it was contrary to what the Indanes thought but Zens and Carls knew the real face behind Crumes.

The Zens and Carls were also traders but they were good-tempered and fought many wars with Crumes and knew that a day would come when Indane territory would be a part of Crumes country. 


On one side Zens and Carls were busy telling the people of Indane that Crumes were different in front of Indane and different in front of others and on other side Crumes were busy making plan to capture Indane. Everyone was busy in their own work except for one kingdom ‘Khshetren’ which was ruled by ‘Rankvan’. 

(Rankvan was a good-tempered man with a good knowledge of history and he had a sense of what was good and what was bad. In other words, if we say he was a well-educated person of Indane. Rankvan knew that the Crumes had a bad thought to conquer Indane so he went into secret negotiations with Zens and Carls to destroy Crumes.) 

By now each and every person of Indane was taking help of the Crumes to destroy and annex each other’s property or kingdom. This was a big advantage for the Crumes to scatter Indanes and create and empty space between the hearts of the Indanes like two diverging plate boundaries. The Crumes worked as a water and took that empty space. 

The real face of Crumes came in front of the people of Indane when they called a ship full of Crume soldiers from their country and with their help they began to capture Indane slowly-slowly. After this incident the people of Indane realised that their biggest fault in life was that they trusted the people who were not from their country but what’s the reason to cry when everything had gone out of their hand. In between this period many people were training themselves to fight with Crumes and drive them out of their country and one such man was Kalmov. He was the son of King Asimov, the ruler of Nambgarh. He was a key figure who fought pitched battles with Crumes but never won. It is said that he fought over forty-nine (49) battles with the Crumes but never won them as Crumes were stronger and their soldiers were more in numbers than his. They (Crumes) went on inheriting the kingdoms of Indane one by one. By this time there were over eight lakh (800000) people in Crumes army and over five-lakh (500000) were Indanes only and rest of them were Arcs, Sones, Groovens and the Crumes themselves. Arcs made about fifty-nine thousand (59000), Sones about fort-one thousand (41000), Groovens about eighty-one thousand (81000) of the total population in the army of Crumes and rest of them were the Crumes themselves and this number went on increasing as the Crumes went on inheriting more and more kingdoms. Many Indanes joined the army because they were forced to do so due to poverty and fulfil their basic means of livelihood. A time came when the Crumes had conquered almost all the parts of the Indane. The people of Indane witnessed a sudden change and this change was the emergence of Zeron Dic who was a leader of Crumes. At first, he went across all the parts of Indane and after travelling the whole country he introduced a new law that shocked the people of Indane. This was the law of Acme Redeem. This law stated that all the kingdoms of Indane with an adopted heir will be considered under the rule of Crumes. The kingdom would function as per the rules of Crumes and no one could go against it. This law came to be a great advantage for the Crumes but a great dis-advantage for Indanes. Many kingdoms like Jhangir (1848), Satana (1849), Seol (1851), Ninge (1855) and many more were there that came under this list. 

Many kings and Queens protested against the law but whoever went against it was prisoned and then executed. This created a sense of daunt in the minds of people of Indane and they accepted everything that was being done with without knowing whether it was good or bad. 


CHAPTER II

THE EMERGENCE OF KALMOV

After losing so many battles with the Crumes, Kalmov was re-planning to re-attack the Crumes but in a different manner.

One day while Kalmov was planning with his ministers, a soldier came inside and said, “The Crumes have attacked our kingdom and can reach here by anytime.” Kalmov’s planning was half done when he gave a sudden call to his soldiers, “Gather all the arms and ammunitions. Today the victory shall be ours!!” by now Crumes had reached the kingdom of Nambgarh with all their army. Kalmov’s army was not ready at that time. The Crumes attacked them without giving them any sign of indication or instruction or warning and broke the door of the Kalmov’s palace and most of the soldiers in Kalmov’s army were killed by the soldiers in Crume’s army

(Fact: The door of the Kalmov’s palace was very weak because of the battles that had taken place in Nambgarh.)

In the battle, many soldiers fought bravely but who could prolong to fight with such a large army of Crumes as a result Kalmov lost again but this time Crumes had attacked him in a sudden way and were very furious. They tried to kill Kalmov but he carefully managed to escape from wicked and went underground for several months. In between these days, the Crumes searched for him very impatiently but could not find him.

(Note: Due to battle with Kalmov the Crumes were very furious and wanted to kill Kalmov that’s why they were searching for him impatiently.)

The Crumes thought that by this time he would have died but one day he was seen in Deera park and an Indane informed this to The Crumes as they had kept a prize money of 200 pon for the person who would find Kalmov. So, on the report the soldiers of Crumes surrounded Kalmov and without giving any alert they attacked him. Kalmov securely got shelter under a palm tree and took out his gun and began to shoot them. In the war that followed between the Crumes and Kalmov, many soldiers of Crumes were left wounded. By now Kalmov had only one bullet left in his pistil and with this bullet he wanted to kill a special person so he said, “Harr Harr Mahadeva!” and gave a headshot to the captain of Crume’s army and ran away as fast as he could leaving a smoke bomb behind. The Crumes rubbed their eyes and slowly slowly the smoke spread all over the surroundings making the atmosphere look like that there were only clouds and no land but obviously it wasn’t. In between this period Kalmov escaped from that place and again went underground but this time he never came back in front of the Crumes. He used to get his two-time meal from the house of an old hermit who lived in the village nearby but after knowing this fact the Crumes sent soldiers and burnt the cottage with the hermit. After knowing this Kalmov took shelter under the king of Suran but the king being in a confusion whether he was an Indane or not held him as a prisoner for several days until he came to know one day that he (Kalmov) was none other than the king of Nambgarh whose father had once helped the king of Suran to defeat the Crumes but unfortunately he had lost his kingdom after the sudden attack of the Crumes several months ago. After knowing this shocking fact, the king of Suran said, “You..You.. are the son of my friend Asimov who used to be king of Nambgarh one time but was killed by the Crumes and you were assigned as the king of Nambgarh as the army of the Crumes could not capture your kingdom because of the presence of Rankvan, but now he is not there. I am very sorry for all I have done with you in between these days.” Kalmov replied, “You need not ask for sorry, it’s not your fault but of the Crumes who have dethroned me from my kingdom, I will take revenge on them but this cannot be done without your help and also with the help of Rankvan. Can you just tell me the story of my father, I want to know how he died at an early age and I was given his place? I swear that I would dethrone the Crumes from Indane and would not leave them of any, I would attack the country of Crumes also at any cost for my father and for my country. Can you also tell me who is this Rankvan and where does he live? What happened to him? The king of Suran said, “Don’t be in a haste to know everything. I will tell you everything but before that you take some food and water.”


CHAPTER III

THE MYSTERY OF ALPHA BEHIND THE BLUTAL DOOR

After having his lunch Kalmov again asked the king of Suran about what he knew about his father and also about Rankvan, but the king of Suran was busy in his court work so he (Kalmov) decided to see the enormous kingdom of Suran as it was very beautiful and also how can I miss this, it was full of mysteries and secrets which many people were trying to solve them from centuries but they were so complicated that they could not solve them. Different people had different ideas; the proof of the mystery changed from one person to the other as the time passed by.

(NOTE: Many mysteries were first termed true but when philosophers went in deep with the theory of the mystery, it came as untrue)

(FACT: Many such mysteries were created by the people of ancient period and people began to believe that it was true. These became popular as rumours spread from one place to the other with the speed light from one century to the other and a time came when it became so popular that people began to go deeper about the concept of these mysteries and till now they are working on it.)

 One such possible mystery which the philosophers believed that it was true and could exist in this world was the mystery of Alpha behind the brutal door.


(NOTE: Don’t be in a confusion about the mystery of alpha behind the brutal door; there is a hidden thing in this mystery i.e. it is comprised of many theories but there are two prominent theories mainly the theory of Saber and the other which according to me is true and I believe that it is the most important one is the theory of Bing: The Regmark Door. I will discuss the first theory in the mystery of alpha behind the Brutal door i.e. the theory of Saber in this Legnote and the other theory i.e. the theory of Bing: The Regmark Door in another chapter.)


(Legnote: According to the theory of Saber, long long ago there was once a boy named Kalin who was very fond of the stonehalt. Stonehalt was the work of nature formed on the back side of a Mountain which was visible to only those people who lived to the south of that mountain. One who lived there could see a clear spot of that place with his/her eyes. Kalin was one of that boys who lived in the southern part of that mountain. Although everyone could see the stonehalt but they saw it in a normal way and Kalin saw a unique feature in the stonehalt that there was a small door in the peak of it which was not visible clearly to everyone so Kalin kept it as a secret within himself. One day while Kalin was getting ready to go for work in his fields he saw big bean of light passing through the stonehalt. To his surprise the light began to move round and round around the Stonehalt and went inside that small door that was visible only to Kalin.

Kalin rushed towards the stonehalt, at first his journey was easy: walking through the forests but when he reached near the stonehalt a group of wild bees attacked him but Kalin didn’t loose faith and finally he entered the place. He escaped from bees using his farming tool and other equipment which he used to carry with him to the field and with their help he earned hid livelihood. After he had crossed the wild bees a tribal person who was looking like a mad person attacked him with his spare with his mates but now Kalin had no means to escape from the tribal people as they had surrounded him from all the eight directions and also he was single and they were many in number, their size was also bigger than that that of Kalin. They were speaking in a very old language which Kalin could not understand. Without any indication the tribal people attacked him but luckily they leaved some space between them while they were coming to attack Kalin from which Kalin escaped. At first Kalin fought with them using his farming tools and equipment as he did with the bees and later when he saw that he could no longer bear them he escaped from the left over space by the tribal people and began to run as fast as he could and the tribal people also started to follow him shouting all the way with their weapons raising towards the sky and then coming back to the ground but after some time when Kalin found that the tribals were not going to give up so easily so he began to run more faster than before, when he was saw that the tribals were out of the reach he climbed a tree which was very dense as he knew that they would be coming towards him and this came true, after some time the tribals appeared there from all the directions but they could not find Kalin so they decided to go back empty hand. They were about to go only when a giant squirrel indicated that Kalin was there on the tree so the tribals came back and began to shout but they didn’t climb as they didn’t know how to climb. Kalin was in a confusion when he saw that he was he was a few steps away from the stonehalt so he jumped from the tree and landed straight forward in front of the stonehalt. Though he was injured yet he was happy as he was out of danger. He stayed there for one day and then marched forward and began until he reached the small door on the stonehalt. Kalin jumped with joy and said, “woo hoo! At last I reached here” saying this he was about to enter when he noticed that the door was very small for him to enter so he began to break it with his equipment and a time came when it was big enough for Kalin to enter and without wasting a millisecond he went inside and suddenly the door closed and another door appeared in front of him and from here begins the other theory, the theory of Bing: The Regmark Door.)


CHAPTER IV

BING: THE REGMARK DOOR

After the emergence of new door and the closing of the outlet Kalin was in that state of mind where the brain on a person doesn’t works at all, he was in a state where he could have done anything, who knows may he have died but I bet you that he had not done any of these things. He had used his brain even more sharply and came to a conclusion that he would wait for the almighty god to help him and give him some clue. The god would have had heard his voice or not that can not be said but he saw a rat digging inside and after some time the sound of the rat came from other end of the door and no one knows from where a hope came in him and he stood up; he attached his ears with the door and began to hear the voices that were coming from the other end of the door so he began do dig inside the ground so as to reach the other end and without knowing what was being happening with him he went of digging and digging and came to the other end of the door and found that he was in a totally new world. He had not thought anything about it even in his dream that he saw now. 

This place totally unknown to him. As he stepped forward without knowing anything he fell inside a deep well which was covered with grass on top. It took almost three days for Kalin to touch ground with his feet. When he stepped down he found himself near a big house which was looking like a palace with a big door. Kalin opened it and went inside. Before going any further, he closed the door so that no one could see him. After entering the palace or a big house he roamed here and there from one room to the other from time to time until he came in a room which had a small door. He thought of entering that door but it was locked with a golden lock; he tried each and every key to open it but his effort was of no use. After trying so many keys he got tired and went for a good sleep. The next day he again tried the remaining keys but it was a failure, when all the keys were over but the lock didn’t open so he began to find another key and came to the terrace of the palace and found a key inside a big class case. He took it to that room and broke the glass case to see and try the last key for which his hope was still alive. When he took out that key he saw that it was a golden key and the lock was also golden: seeing this his curiosity grew even more and he tried this key in a haste and at once it opened and dazzling smile broke out on the face of Kalin and he went inside it and saw a strange thing.  


CHAPTER IV

RIM OF THE TREX

The sight that Kalin saw was very terrible but at the same time it was interesting and also how can I miss this, it was daunting. He saw that they were huge beasts standing in front of a small creature who was looing like an ant but not exactly an ant, it was very big than the ant but very small than the beasts. The beasts could not move and he (Kalin) saw that they (the beasts) were tied with an invisible rope. Kalin decided not to go inside as he thought it was very dangerous and he might also be captured by the ant like structures but his precautions were of no use, he was seen, captured and then tied with the invisible ropes as of the beasts by the ants but he found that the rope was very tender and he broke it at once. Seeing this the beasts spoke, “you are so powerful that you broke the strongest rope. Please help us to get rid of these kainams.”


Kalin could not understand what was happening there and he broke the ropes by which the beasts were tied. At once after getting free the beasts killed all the kainams and thanked Kalin and said, “we all are Trex and are highly thankful to you for saving us, these kainams had captured us wanted to kill us but you succeeded in saving our life. From now on we will serve you forever.” Kalin understood everything that was happening there.


CHAPTER V

THE WAR OF LINGDEN

When Kalmov was roaming here and there looking the beautiful kingdom of Suran he came near a small window which was locked and he (Kalmov) wished to go inside that window and look what was there inside that small window so he went to the king of Suran and aske what was there behind that small door in the southern – western part of his kingdom to which he (the king of Suran) replied, “you don’t know anything about that so don’t even dare to go in front of that door. It is a door with full of mysteries……” he continued with the mystery of the alpha behind the brutal door. After hearing all the theory Kalmov said, “but where is the key to that small window to which the king of Suran said, “the key has not been found yet and the proofs are kept in the secrecy room.” He didn’t realise what he said and taking this advantage he went inside the secrecy room and took all the proof manuscripts and went on finding the key. After three months he was succeeded in getting the key, he found it inside the storn lake whose location was opposite to that of the small window. Kalmov reported this to the king of Suran and after hearing this he was very happy and commanded his troops to march towards that window and when he reached there Kalmov opened that door and he went inside first and then followed by the kings and his courtiers and then at last the soldiers. After all of them had entered the small window closed and dark made its entrance to that room inside that window. After some time, light saw that there was dark inside the room so it also came there slowly slowly. When light had completely occupied the space of dark everyone thought of going ahead but there was no way and everyone thought that it was the same door that Kalin saw in the theory of Saber and everyone took help of the theory of the Bing: The Regmark Door and began to dig the ground and after a couple of hours they reached the other side of the door and found the Trex there and Kalin was also there. The smell of a dead animal was also coming from the remains of the Kainams. Everyone had thought that Kalin would have died but they were surprised to see him inside the typhoon trex and other trex were following him. Kalin ordered the trex army to capture all the strangers but suddenly Kalmov realised that the trex army could help the people of Indane to remove away the Crumes from their country and he said to Kalin, “wait! I want to ask a question about you; from which country do you belong to?”

Kalin replied, “I belong to the country of Indane which is a very famous country. But why are you asking this question?” Kalmov said just for good relationship between you and me.” “hahaha” he laughed. “relationship between you and me? Impossible. I don’t even know a bit about you.” Kalmov said, “maybe there is no relationship between me and you but you may not be knowing that the country of Indane is in danger.” “what type of danger?” Kalin asked? “I will not tell you until you promise to help me” replied Kalmov. Kalin was not in a mood to promise but he wanted to know about what had happened to his birthplace so he agreed with Kalmov. After Kalin had promised Kalmov said, “ok fine! I will tell you now. I am also an Indane and have come here to seek your help…” Kalin said, “don’t waste my time just arrive to the point. What’s the deal?”

Kalmov replied, “it’s not a deal it your duty to protect your birthplace from the aliens.” “what has happened to my birthplace? Who are these aliens? From where have they come? Just tell me everything and how it all happened” asked Kalin. Kalmov replied, “wait! wait! don’t be in a haste I am telling you everything” “the Crumes who have come to the country of Indane from far away alien land and hence we have termed them aliens. They have captured almost all the parts of the Indane” added the king of Suran. Then he and Kalmov told everything that how it happened. After completing the history of the destruction of the country of Indane Kalmov said, “we just want your and your army’s help to drive away the foreigners.” Kalin replied, “I am ready to help you but you have to promise me that you will not tell anyone about this place……” he was about to complete his words when Rankvan appeared there and the king of Suran said, “Rankvan? From where have you come” Rankvan told them everything and all of them planned to drive away the Crumes.

After a couple of days, the Indanes and the Trex attacked the Crumes and this battle was the first war fought by all the Indanes together. This battle arose from the kingdom of Suran and spread to all the places of Indane. In the battle that followed Zens and Carls also helped the Indanes to drive away the Crumes. This famous battle came to be known as ‘The War of Lingden’.



CHAPTER VI

THE TREATY OF ZAILLES 

In the War of Lingden many Inane rulers including the Rankvan, Kalmov and the king of Kalmov also died and many political parties were formed and the main of them were the coders which lead the freedom struggle of Indane. After the War of Lingdane the trex went back to their place and were again planning to drive away the Crumes. By this time Crumes had known that their life was in danger so they began to take make a conflict between the people of Indane by taking certain decisions in favour of a particular community. Many leaders of coders were also affected by this cause. After a few years the rooz asked a separate nation for them but this proposal was rejected by the Coders. This proposal came to be known as the famous Treaty of Zailles. In the same time Gandhi ji were busy in uniting the people of India and lead several movements. One day Kalin gave a call and attacked the Crumes and this time Crumes had to acknowledge their defeat and they went back to their country. This way the Country of Indane got its independence on 15 August 1947 and the next day followed the division of two nations and two communities. The country of Indane was celebrating the joy of Independence and at the same time the sorrow of partition.


The End


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